honest opinions needed

[dragonlite]

ok.... I want everyones honest opinions! No holds barred! here is a pendant and a turtle I did and want some tips and pointers or possibly (in a perfect world) a buyer...lol What would I charge for items like this? I am still fairly new to boro but think this is the way I want to go.
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[krzy23lgs]

im a rookie to so i cant give you any advice, but your shit looks good...keep it up!

[wfsupply]

Keep it up man, you've got a good hand for small detail work.

[dragonlite]

Thanks guys! That really soes help! I know I need more PPP but hey who dont...lol

[drew1492]

I would say work on your shaping and perportions on the turtle the other one looks nice. But hell I couldnt make a turtle look that good first try if I went and made one. Just keep on truckin

[Kato]

Looks good so far. Let's see those loops

[ALIEN!]

anywhere from 15-30 at an art show. 8-10 wholesale. Clean em up and you can get more.

[Aymie]

Work in careful dot placement on the implosion so you get a more clean and defined look. Don't push so hard when flattening the back and those points in the center will be cleaner as well. Other than that, they both look nice.

Not trying to be negative, just trying to give you the constructive criticism it seemed like you were looking for. Hope it helps.

[sertaiz]

^^^^^ wait till you get the center ripping hot, hold it at a downward angle spinning until the heat base goes from the front third to the center of the front two thirds and the front will be a little colder. then push it or even wait another second with the glass touching the graphite so itll cool the skin and bottom of your implosion to keep the shape. then one push, and right back to heat.
just have fun and it'll show you how it works, master one thing at a time

[RamblezMarblez]

turtles have tales...I like the fins and not elephant feet...your pendent looks flat...keep the ball like curve to keep the magnification/depth look...flat implodes can look cool (I like ghost like bluez/purple implodes flat and angled semi sideways)...keep coming back...amen

[hashmasta-kut]

did you mean elephant ear feet?

[dragonlite]

cool thanks everyone this really helps! Dont know where to improve if not told :)